August 2018

Celebrity, editing and regular writing

What a month we’ve had – The World Cup, Wimbledon tennis, Open golf, Tour de France cycling, record temperatures, thunder and lightning! We’ve also had road and rail chaos, more Brexit and … Cliff Richard.


            I will state straightaway that I am in total agreement with the judge in the Cliff Richard case – it was an outrageous invasion of privacy and, sadly, Cliff’s name will always be tarnished by association, even though he was never arrested or charged. And I say all this as a former BBC journalist.

            I recognise and understand the other side of this unfortunate incident: that if no-one is named, then others affected can’t come forward. But surely this was a case of a news organisation hounding a man because he was a celebrity when all they had was a tip-off that he was a possible suspect. A helicopter?!

            If it had been a non-celebrity, would they have employed the same, expensive, means of coverage? I think not. Celebrity, in this case, paid a high price.

            Yes, Cliff has won the court case and has been awarded costs and compensation. And who has to pay? The BBC or, rather, we license-payers. I shall be extremely disappointed if the BBC appeals the verdict. They should rather investigate their own standards of journalism, particularly in relation to celebrities.  

image002OK, rant over. Onto something much nicer. I thought I’d let you know how things are going with the Wilbur Smith prize. As one of five people shortlisted for the Unpublished Adventure Novel of the Year, I have been in touch over the past six weeks with the literary consultant who has been editing my novel. He has done an extremely thorough job and has introduced to me to some grammar and punctuation rules that I have never come across before! I’ll just say that I took out the word but 833 times and put in a few extra commas. It definitely reads better now.

            I’ve also received the official invitation to the awards presentation evening in September. It’s all becoming so much more real! And I really am getting on with the sequel, to date just over two-thirds of the way there.

            One thing I’ve learned about writing over the past few years is that Little and Often is, for me, the best way to go. I try to stick to a specific word count for at least five days in every week. This way, I keep the flow going and can usually find the time, amidst the hurly-burly of general life. But, as well we all know, various life dramas can take over at the most unexpected of times. But even if it’s as little as one or two hundred words a day, more when I’m away on holiday, it all mounts up.

            images-18One or two of the writers in my groups confess that they only start their writing homework on the day of our next class. They will have had the theme or topic or task for at least a month and, they assure me, they HAVE been THINKING about it. But pen-to-paper or sitting down at the computer only happens a matter of hours before we are meeting. The two people in particular (they know who they are) always produce really entertaining pieces. I’m sure they appreciate that their contributions are the first draft towards a final creation. They still have to take out the buts and add a few commas 🙂 

Also, this month: five of the competitions I posted last month are still valid and there are plenty of writing prompts to get you going, some as daily writing starters, others that could lead to short stories or longer.

Please do get in touch if you have any comments about my blog or any writing questions.

Happy writing.


Take a Break!

I know we’re having some wonderful weather here in the UK at the moment but I’m not talking about a holiday break; rather taking a break from writing. I’m sure you already appreciate how important it is to incorporate regular breaks into your writing routine. Too much sitting at a computer is bad for your body. And too much time constantly working on one particular writing project can affect your creativity. But there’s one particular writing break that I want to address this month: the break you should have when you’ve finished the first draft of your novel (or, indeed, short story, essay or article).

 You’ve been working for months, perhaps years, writing your novel. You know your characters like your own family, all their personality traits, nuances, habits. You’re as familiar with all the settings of your book as you are with your own home surroundings. You’ve typed the final paragraph, sat back with an immense sigh of relief, and then you realise you’ve got to go back to the beginning to start editing. You might already have ideas in your head as to where you need to change events, conversations; where you can beef up certain characters; where you can write in more conflictstop-1013732_960_720

But this is the point at which you need to STOP. Really STOP.
DON’T start fiddling
DON’T turn to page 56 where you remember you had a problem
DON’T start correcting your punctuation.


brain-2062057_960_720At this point, your brain is still in writing mode – the left side is the more dominant: that’s the creative side. You need to give that side a break and later, probably much later, let the right side of the brain, the analytical side, take over to do all the, well, analysing: the corrections, the punctuation and spelling, identifying holes in the plot. If your left brain is still involved, then emotions will still be at work. And although we want those in the actual prose, we need to be as non-judgmental and clear-thinking as we can when we start editin

Stephen King, who has sold more than 350 million books, has very definite views on this particular juncture in the life of a novel.
“When you write a book, you spend day after day scanning and identifying the trees. When you’re done, you have to step back and look at the forest.”                                                                                                                             
He says a manuscript (for a novel) should take a season (three months) to write. Then, he says, he puts a physical copy of it in a drawer and forgets about it for at least six weeks.

 How long should a break be? No-one can tell you. That’s up to you and if you have one, your deadline. I recently looked at a novel I finished last year while on holiday. I knew I had to do some historical research before letting anyone else see it. In the meantime, I had other writing projects to get on with. So I really did leave that novel alone for at least six months. When I re-read it, I was pleased to see that the characters developed as I had planned and the pace ebbed and flowed in the right places. I was also quite surprised to read sections that I couldn’t actually remember writing. And, yes, my own writing produced some emotion in me – the writer! But switching to my right brain, I could see, far more clearly than before, where the plot sagged, characters who weren’t even necessary, others who needed more personality, plus, of course, spelling and punctuation mistakes.

 So my advice to fellow writers is always take a break when you’ve completed the first draft of a particular writing project. Don’t think of the break as wasted time. The break itself will rejuvenate you and at least half your brain gets a rest!

 (For those of you who’ve been asking about the photos, this one above is of the village of Taqah on the south-eastern coast of Oman, the region where my novel Pathway to the Gods is set.)images-17

 Also this month: writing prompts, six competitions, two book recommendations and two fascinating blogs – one about why it’s good to enter competitions and the other – about graveyards!

 Happy Writing




June 2018

I hope you don’t mind if I share some really good news with you, fellow writers.
I’ve been shortlisted for an international novel-writing competition.

image001I had recently decided that I would dedicate the rest of this year in researching and then self-publishing my historical novel, having done the rounds of agents over the past few years. Then, when I had forgotten ever entering, I’m informed I’m in the last five of the Wilbur Smith Adventure Writing Prize – in the section for the best unpublished manuscript by a debut author.
I was asked not to divulge the news until the official announcement was made on May 30th so I had a few days when I was walking around with a big grin, longing to tell all my writing friends.

Part of the prize for getting this far is feedback and support over the next three months from a literary agent. And towards the end of September, I’m invited to a prize-giving evening in London where the winner will be announced and will receive a travel grant for researching their next novel. The organization running the competition – the Wilbur and Niso Smith Foundation – hope that the finalists will all find agent

            Oh, I’ve resisted exclamation marks long enough!

So that’s my summer sorted: developing my novel and finishing the sequel.

If you’d like to read more about the competition and the five finalists, here’s the link.

 I started this first novel a while ago but when I had written around 6000 words, I stopped. I decided I needed help as this was THE novel I wanted to write. So I applied for and gained a place on Brunel University’s Creative Writing MA: The Novel and for two years, I lived, breathed and slept writing. I made some good writing friends and, since finishing our MAs, we have shared the highs and lows of completing our novels, critiquing each other’s work, searching for agents and entering competitions.

            I believe we’ve all found it hard keeping motivated at times. One rejection can put you back weeks if not months. Silence from literary agents is even harder. Then there’s the question of whether to pay for more help: critiquing services abound, so too competitions which offer feedback for an additional fee. Workshops, conferences, writing groups and writing buddies: all can offer opinions and advice.

            The trouble is, everyone makes different suggestions: one agent loved all my characters, another thought they sounded too similar; some readers liked the changes in Point of View, others didn’t. One agent liked my writing and asked me to write a YA novel – I had to explain I’m a bit beyond that age group. All too often, the responses were merely negative and of no practical use:  not for us; I don’t feel passionately enough; not our thing; not right for us.

        At times like these, writing friends really help, especially if you know they are giving you their genuine opinions and not just Aunt Pattie’s “It’s wonderful, dear.” Of course, in the end, it’s always up to YOU to judge each person’s opinion, advice, feedback, and critique.celebrate-311709_960_720

            I only have one rule in writing – whenever you get good news, CELEBRATE. A good critique, applause at a writing group, a magazine acceptance, long and short-listed in competitions, even a nice rejection letter. They are all markers on your writing path. Don’t gloss over them – CELEBRATE them.

Also this month: writing prompts, competitions and a tip you’ve heard before, but it always bears repeating.

Happy Writing.


Writing with Passion

Apologies for the blog being a few days later than usual. But I used the topic below on one of my classes this week and I didn’t want them to have a sneak preview. 

The topic is PASSION.178865612_faeecb4c56_b
Strong emotion or enthusiasm
Any powerful or compelling emotion
The highest level of obsession
Being invested in something or someone
A combination of love and hatred
Something you can’t stop doing
Something or  someone who can rule your life

 Passion can be applied both

  • to you as a writer – how passionate are you? What are the topics you are passionate about?
  • to your characters – what are they passionate about? what do they really, really want? what drives them to be the characters you want them to be?

What is Scarlett O’Hara passionate about in Gone With The Wind? Tara (& Ashley Wilkes)Vivien_Leigh_Scarlet
Which dance is generally thought to be the most passionate? Argentine Tango
What is Mrs Bennett’s passion in Pride and Prejudice? Getting her daughters married
What is Jean Brodie’s passion in The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie? Her girls

Certain professions seem to lean towards passion:

Doctors, to save lives
Lawyers, to win cases
Police, to uphold the law
Teachers, to educate

But for every character who is passionate about something or someone, there has to be a reason as to WHY they are passionate.

The doctor may have a disabled sibling they want to help.
The detective might be driven by a personal case he/she has never solved.
The teacher might come from a poor village where a good education wasn’t an option or had to be paid for.

 If you are not passionate about your stories, why should your readers be?

Here are a couple of websites that offer further reading on the subject of PASSION.

First one here
And the second here

In the writing prompts this month, I’ve suggested an exercise to explore PASSION in your characters.


I’m making a concerted effort to stop using exclamation marks since learning that President Trump has used 9241 since he started tweeting, including 3660 last year alone. Here’s the full story and comment from Craig Brown of the Daily Mail.

It’s just too easy, isn’t it? Make a statement and then let your reader know it’s surprising, outrageous, unusual, more than interesting, extreme etc with just a punctuation mark. If your writing needs an exclamation mark, it’s not in the writing.IMG_5780

I used to use exclamation marks all the time, particularly on postcards (remember those?) and then in emails.

No more.

The only exclamation marks I’m allowing myself are this set of printer’s blocks that someone gave me, possibly as a hint. (I’m sure there’s something missing at the end of that sentence but what?)

And finally this month, what do you think these words have in common?

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Amazingly, ALL these words are being REMOVED from
The Oxford Junior Dictionary. The reason? To make way for modern technology terms, such as Blog, chatroom and attachment. The full story is in the Guardian here

Happy Writing – don’t forget to go the Prompts and Competitions pages.








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Get ACTIVE with your research

I’ve been fortunate to have enjoyed a few days away from home recently and apart from some much-needed r’n’r, I was able to get back on track with my writing. There’s something about being away from regular routines, shopping, cooking and all the other ‘stuff’ that just needs doing.

            One of the things that I realised early on was that I was taking NOTICE of so much more than when I’m at home. Familiarity may not always breed contempt but it does, I think, breed a certain detachment from or a passive acceptance of one’s usual surroundings.

            Out on Dartmoor, I could appreciate the big skies, the wonderful vistas, the stunning scenery (see above) and the joy of more exercise than I usually get at home! And thanks to other people, there was a lot more for me to notice. I have some great friends in Devon who are bird-watchers and it was quite wonderful when one of them identified a Skylark by its song. It took a while before we could actually see and watch the bird but it was well worth the effort (thank you, Helen).Teignmouth poster

            Visiting new places always gets my imagination going. I only have to see a castle or a church or a timbered building and I’m already plotting a story of what happened there years ago! I take pictures for future reference, buy guidebooks and visit museums. I spent a fascinating hour at the museum in the attractive seaside town of Teignmouth. I learned that back in the 1770s, during the summer when the men were away fishing in Newfoundland, the town had a team of women rowers who would compete in regattas against a women’s team from Shaldon, the village on the opposite side of the estuary. An interesting titbit to store away for possible future use. IMG_5555

             And I loved this old typewriter – with a complete set of keys just for uppercase letters!

I’m currently working on the sequel to my historical novel set in Oman, with about 20,000 words to go. But I’ve already had an idea for a complete change of scene and time for my next project: 12th century England when Stephen and Matilda were fighting over the crown.          So I’ve visited a couple of motte and bailey castles of the period and was delighted to find another, similar, castle at Lydford on the edge of Dartmoor. Lydford castleThis was built post-Norman invasion and the keep subsequently became a notorious prison. The ruins are open to the skies so a fair bit of imagination is required. But I just loved climbing the steps that 12th-century knights and ladies might have climbed, touching the walls where tapestries would have hung, looking out of the windows at the bailey where a pig would be roasting and travelling merchants would be selling their wares.

            So, my advice this month: get out there and do some ACTIVE research. Even if it’s just going to a supermarket, try to NOTICE something different, something unusual, something out of the ordinary that you can use in your writing. It’s the little details that count, that make your reader feel at home, even in an environment they’ve never visited.

            Have you been to your local museum recently? Or are you near a city that has a museum? If so, please don’t try to do it all in one go! I went to the Museum of London last month and just walked around the medieval section. That was enough for me for a morning! And I came away with a lingering image of a lady’s comb made out of animal bone and two strings of amber jewellery – just enough to get my imagination going.

Happy writing


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